Saturday, March 8, 2014
Mum
Mum means the world to me.she is the light to my path that's why we'll never be apart.She knows how to cheer me up,and let me forget about my problems.People wonder why are mothers important,they should notice that without them we wouldn't be breathing right now.Mothers are supportive,forgiving,emotional and loving and thats why they're important to us.My role model in life is mum,because she have done alot to gain the respect she has right now.To mum i'll always be her little angel.When she is around there's no where else,i'd rather be.I think every mum should be treated right because she is valuable and we couldn't replace her.I thank god for having my mun and i wouldn't replace her for the whole world if i could.
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Mum's are cool! You do have 5 errors though. Can you fix them? there are 2 missing full stops, 1 missing capital letter, 1 missing apostrophe and 1 comma you need to remove.
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