Job is a very important thing in our lives. I want to be a nurse since I was a child. I always saw an amazing movies about good doctors and nurses. It is my dream job. I like to be a nurce for different reasons. First reason is I like to study medical sciences so much. It is something I think I will feel happy when I study it. Second reason is I hope to be a nurse because I want to help sick people who can't help themselves and I will be happy when I see sick people go back their homes happy and I hope to draw a smile on their faces when they are okay. It is a great job. My parents advice me to be a nurse. They will be a proud of me if I finish my studya. I hope to graduate from Zayed University soon because I want to work in my dream job.
Hamda Mohammed
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A Job is a very important thing in our lives. I want to be a nurse since I was a child. I always saw an amazing movies about good doctors and nurses. It is my dream job. I like to be a nurce for different reasons. The First reason is I like to study medical sciences so much. It is something I think I will feel happy when I study it. The Second reason is I hope to be a nurse because I want to help sick people who can't help themselves and I will be happy when I see sick people go back their homes happy and I hope to draw a smile on their faces when they are okay. It is a great job. My parents advice me to be a nurse. They will be a proud of me if I finish my studya. I hope to graduate from Zayed University soon because I want to work in my dream job.
Great idea Hamda. It's a really valuable job for society.
ReplyDeleteYou have 3 missing article errors Hamda? Can you find them? Current grade is 70%
Hi Hamda,
ReplyDeleteFind above the missing articles. The bold ones are added and the italics one is to be removed.